Manuscript Critique

Angel Akurienne—Short or Feature-length Screenplays and Plays

Open to: Short or Feature-length Screenplays and Plays

Limit: Please email [email protected] for scripts that are more than 150 pages

What You’ll Submit: Your script of a screenplay or play up to 150 pages or a treatment/plot synopsis for your script up to 10 pages.  

What You’ll Get: 

Screenplay Critique - With each script Angel will focus on story structure, character arcs, and conflicts that are compelling and drive the story to earned resolutions. As well as analyzing themes, objectives and implementing proper technical script formatting. Depending on the length of each script, writers should expect around 1-2 pages of notes on shorts and 3-4 pages on full-length scripts of 90-120 pages.

Treatment & Lookbook Services - Angel will review your treatment of your story up to 10 pages and or your story’s lookbook. She will work with you to improve your story’s elements and overall impact. Angel encourages writers to follow up after reviewing the given notes via an email or phone call/zoom (30 mins for short story; hour-long for full length).

Pricing: 

Screenplay critique: $50 (base price) + $2/page

Screenplay treatment review (up to ten pages): $150

Lookbook review: $125

Turnaround:

• Screenplay or Play Notes (Up to 150 pages): 2 weeks
• Short Screenplay or Play Notes (Up to 40 pages): 1 week
• Treatment Notes (Up to 10 pages): 2 weeks
• Lookbook Notes (Up to 10 pages): 1 week